Impatience

Aug 28, 2012 16:22

Title: Impatience
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: 2woon
Genre: Smut
Wordcount: 2.4K
Summary: Pretty much a PWP where Youngwoon attempts to fuck Jongwoon
A/N: so this is my first finished smut fic (if this can even count as smut >.>) and I completely blame cadey for encouraging me ( Read more... )

genre:smut, type:fanfiction, rating:nc-17, fandom:super junior, pairing:2woon

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dasidolawa August 28 2012, 17:18:40 UTC
haha yeah. i'm not really sure how it happened but it did >.>
thank you for reading!!

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sango_houshi August 28 2012, 17:14:30 UTC
well that was frustrating. and here i thought it would be good sex. smh... then again not everything goes the right way when your impatient... poor yesung

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dasidolawa August 28 2012, 17:20:00 UTC
sorry for the disappointment! :x i am starting on a sequel now where proper sex does happen though! \o/
poor yeye indeed :c

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junnosukex3 August 28 2012, 17:38:42 UTC
I didn't see the end coming XD Nice idea !

And it worth a sequel because it's soooo frustrating XDDD

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dasidolawa August 28 2012, 17:49:30 UTC
i'm glad you liked!

well i'm 1.3K into the sequel now so we'll see how it goes xD

thank you for reading!

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junnosukex3 August 28 2012, 18:17:06 UTC
Ooooh, I'm really curious now XD

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ego_magnificent August 28 2012, 18:20:17 UTC
omgggg it got depressing really quick! D: omg i am really sad for them both

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dasidolawa August 28 2012, 20:28:37 UTC
haha sorry about that! ^^;
it'll get better for them, don't worry<3
thank you for reading!!

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lulufeca September 2 2012, 04:27:46 UTC
i like this!

is not easy to have sex, and i am glad you have written a not so good gay sex

i think this needs a sequel ( and i love bottom!yesung. he is forever buttom to me because he is cuuute and sexy at the same time)

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dasidolawa September 2 2012, 14:25:11 UTC
i seem to be quickly developing a knack for plotting bad sex lmao. my friend was chastising me for it xD

but yeah seeing all the fic where they have mindblowing sex /every time/ and are pros when it's their first kind of push it for me. i like awkward and realistic i guess, though it's still pretty good either way \o// i'm glad you enjoyed it though! i've had some people be disappointed that it wasn't amazing but... yeah >> i was kind of expecting that

i am starting to write a sequel, but i'm getting back to school soon so it will probably take a while for me to get it finished

it may be yeye topping for this one but i'm definately going to be writing more 2woon in the near future so... they both just seem like they'd switch it up a lot to be which is probably why i ike them so much

/ramble

thank you for reading and commenting!! :D

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lulufeca September 2 2012, 14:32:54 UTC
i just went to your tumblr because your writing was cute and i wanted to pinch you heheheh

bad sex is good. people need to know this, not everyone knows how sex works and you need practice to be good. and there pain and muscular pains after.

study hard. i will wait for more fics.

bye ^^

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dasidolawa September 2 2012, 15:08:39 UTC
i akjhfksd what?? ;A:

ahaha yes exactly, especially from being in an awkward position for however long it lasts. it's a learning process, finding what will feel good etc and... yeah ~_~

thank you!! \o//

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