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VM fic: Going down (Veronica, Ensemble)PG13, Part 5

Jul 16, 2006 10:59

Title: Going down (Veronica, Ensemble, PG 13), Part 5 of 6
Author: Kaze
Characters: Ensemble, Veronica POV
Word Count: 1,707
Spoilers: Season 1
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: None (in this chapter)
Summary: Seven years after graduation, Veronica thinks she escaped her P.I. past, but when a friend needs her help, she goes back into investigation mode.
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asmilesaysalot July 16 2006, 14:12:28 UTC

Beaver! (Shaking an angry fist at the screen) I loved how Dickie was the one to voice outloud how he thinks he's creepy. Go Dickie! Interesting to see how this ends, with Beaver and the other guy holding Cindy. I can't wait for you to finishe this, please let it be soon.

dasq_kaze July 19 2006, 07:07:28 UTC

Hee, thanks for the feedback!
It's interesting to see that people are starting to like Dickie despite his 'pain in the ass'iness ;)
I'll finish this soon, promis, I'm working on the final chapter and I finally decided which of the possible endings I plotted out to actually use ;P

rowanceleste July 16 2006, 14:26:53 UTC

Hmmm, did Beaver kidnap Cindy to get her and little Dickie away from middle Dick because he loves them or because he wants to hurt them?? Inquiry minds want to know.

dasq_kaze July 19 2006, 07:09:53 UTC

Heh, inquiry mind will learn soon ;) There will be one final twist in the last chapter, not as twisty as I originally planned, but I hope it will be enough to shock a little bit

lapdogdesign July 16 2006, 17:08:22 UTC

Ooh, you've still got me fascinated. And confused, but in a good way.

Is Cassidy holding Cindy hostage, or are they all working together - Cindy, the 'kidnapper,' and Beaver?

It's nice to see Veronica warming up to little Dickie, or at least learning how to deal with him. Especially since it took using her taser. Hee!

You've crafted a really twisty tale here. Much like canon, everyone's motives are suspect, no one is clearly black or white. Fascinating really.

I'm most curious to see if we get some L/V resolution in the final chapter (or perhaps an epilogue) or if it's something you're saving to resolve in a future story or leave open ended.

Whatever the case may be, count me in!

dasq_kaze July 19 2006, 07:33:31 UTC

Wow, thanks for the awesome feedback!
I'm glad I could somewhat ease your mind regarding the Veronica / Dickie relationship, the 'save' and subsequential bonding was something I planned from the beginning, so their dislike was maybe set up a bit extreme in the first couple of chapters.
I prefer to write characters with 'shades of grey', this black and white separation isn't really my thing, so I'm glad it came across the right way.
Everything about Veronica will be somewhat resolved (as much as can be in 'real life'), or rather: there won't be a resolution but a 'moving forward'. I don't think there'll be a sequel though, I have to many other ideas for multi-chapter stories and I want to be able to finish them somewhat timely ;P

andrielle July 16 2006, 18:03:48 UTC

Hmmm? This is interesting and getting even better. I can't wait to find out what the heck is going on with Mac and Beaver and that kidnapper guy in the room.

dasq_kaze July 19 2006, 07:10:18 UTC

Thank you!
More is to come soon.

sitebuilderchic July 16 2006, 18:52:32 UTC

Hee. Dickie is one smart cookie.

dasq_kaze July 19 2006, 07:11:35 UTC

Teehee, spread the Dickie love! I never thought I would say that, but there you go ;P