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dataxia

Fanfiction AND Duplicity 04 Preview

Sep 21, 2012 12:40

This is a bit of a preview of Duplicity chapter four. My literary classes are really inspiring me this semester. Hope you like the tidbit.

Note- this has not been edited nor formatted yet. If there is any confusion you may have please notify me. :)

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Yayyy! anonymous October 5 2012, 01:46:45 UTC

Hi there, I just staring reading Duplicity today. Super glad you've written more, even if it's just a tiny tidbit of ch. 4, because I'm really enjoying this story and would love to see where it ends up. I've always liked the idea of fem!Naru, and I like that you haven't made her overly girly just to make sure that everyone knows she's a girl. I also like your interpretation of Sakura. Most of the "sasukecheatsonnaruto" stories I've read have made her out to be a cold-hearted, manipulative bitch who sets out to ruin Naruto's life from day one, but I like how you show this Sakura to regret her actions, even if she still has a bit of a thing for Sasuke. I like how genuinely confused she is about the situation too, how she can't seem to choose between wanting the baby or having Sasuke and Naruto's relationship work out. It seems more realistic based on what we know of her from the manga. Well done :)

Re: Yayyy! dataxia October 18 2012, 05:23:22 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I really do love it when people read my fanfic and find the depth that I try to put in. It also really helps to know that people like it. I know that I don't update much but sincere comments like yours really make me feel motivated.

:D

Re: Yayyy! anonymous October 20 2012, 08:33:02 UTC

You're very welcome! I always used to get super excited whenever I saw a review on the stories I'd written, so I always try to leave some sort of comment (even though I'm a huuuuuuge lurker and don't actually have an account on most of the sites I read from lol). Thank you for updating Duplicity, I know it must be hard to find time to write around RL happenings; I myself have never been able to commit beyond one-shots.

Whooo off to read chapter four :D

Re: Yayyy! dataxia October 22 2012, 04:15:06 UTC

I'm also on fanfiction.net as stalker-san if you're interested. Though I usually update the chapters here 1 day to 1 week in advance on LJ.