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datsun99

Part Twelve

Feb 17, 2008 16:07

I am forced to blame everyone who is reviewing this story for the increasing length of the chapters! : )

Here is Part Twelve, written in a bit of a rush, but I hope it does the trick. As ever, I hope you enjoy it:

Despite his cocktail of meds, Wilson was still up before House the next morning, feeling more well-disposed towards the world than he ( Read more... )

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alemyrddin February 17 2008, 18:44:09 UTC

*sighs*
It had to happen.
And maybe it's for the best.

Great update!

*waits for the next part*

datsun99 February 20 2008, 02:19:13 UTC

it did have to happen - I was kind of dreading writing it too, even after setting myself up! thanks for commenting, will be updating soon

anonymous February 17 2008, 18:58:30 UTC

update! soon!

angelcat2865 February 17 2008, 20:18:43 UTC

ahhhhhhhhh! Ouch! What a place to leave off--hope you update again soon.

datsun99 February 20 2008, 02:20:14 UTC

*grins* i didn't set out to leave people hanging, but my chapter was getting too long, y'know? thanks for commenting, will be writing more soon

nianeyna February 17 2008, 20:55:15 UTC

Nooooooooooo! How can you end it there?

As always, I'm really enjoying this. Good job!

datsun99 February 20 2008, 02:21:41 UTC

thanks very much! will be writing more soon, sorry for the cliffhanger >:)

bernie_laraemie February 17 2008, 23:06:44 UTC

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!

I absolutely love this story! The characterisation is dead on, the descriptions are perfect, the flow is wonderful, the plot is well-constructed...amazing.

CONTINUE PLZ! Also, does this have a title? Something this awesome needs a title so myself and every one I recommend it to can discuss it in great detail :)

datsun99 February 20 2008, 02:24:04 UTC

thanks very much! am glad it all rings true for you, will be updating soon, I hope.

as for the title . . .*shame* the story kind of arrived before the title, so I posted it originally as "attack", more as a description of part one than anything else . . . then wrote ten more chapters and never got around to coming up with anything else! Lame, I know. thank you for commenting, much appreciated :)