If I Knew Then... Ch. 14

[daughtershade]

Title: If I Knew Then

Comments

[anxiety_junkie]

Man, I am loving this story!

The whole scene between Xander and Spike was terrific; they're both acting so shy, it's cute!

“Bye? God, I’m such a wanker.”

He flops back onto the hard tomb and tries not to obsess over every detail of the conversation, because that would mean something, something very frightening indeed.

Hee!

[daughtershade]

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm looking forward to the last two chapters.

[pageeglantine]

Aw cute endy! :)

[daughtershade]

Thanks!

[sevendeadlyfun]

I think that what I like most about this story (beyond the naughty bits because who doesn't like naughty bits?) is that it's so true to character and so realistic. Spike and Xander's reactions don't have one false note in them. You're definitely writing an award-worthy story here! Great chapter, and I loved the little byplay between Spike and Willow! Excellent work!

[daughtershade]

Thank you! It's a lot of fun to be writing Spike again. Both he and Xander are dear to my heart because I think I have a bit of both of them in my personality. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and Spike and Willow are always great characters to play off each other.

[davinci_1985]

I loved this one, especially the last bit, about Spike always taking care of te Slayer's friends.

[daughtershade]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping not to come off too cheesy. :D

[anonymous]

I'm loving this too and did you say "last two chapters"? Oh, say it ain't so! Or at least that you're going to continue it in a sequel or something. This is too good!

[daughtershade]

Yes. I'm almost done with the season. I may do one bit sequels, so we'll have to see.