The vast, twisting all

[dave_sempai]

Conformity is tainted by the mark of mediocrity

Comments

[koki_no_42387]

sorry, this reminds me about the south park episode when Stan became a goth kid. i know that's not what the poem is meant to be, but yeah...gomen.

[dave_sempai]

but his poem was about being heart broked and cutting hisself up.

whereas this piece is about living forever.

[koki_no_42387]

yeah, that's true. i think that episode sprang to mind because i had just watched that episode before i read your poem.