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Mar 30, 2009 00:14

Week 5 ey?

My commonplace book seems to be filling up with more and more "ramblings" less structured writing and very little of substance, partly inspired by Saturday nights but that's a hazy story.

So whats on offer this week?

Another poem - Judging from last weeks inundation of critiques i'm just going to assume they are well received. (thanks to ( Read more... )

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squarebluefish March 31 2009, 08:08:33 UTC
Okay, I think my brain just exploded from carnivorous guilt. But at the same time, appreciation! What a great poem. I think it could use a kick here and there (mostly to do with commas because I am a COMMA ADDICT but that's a poet's prerogative, punctuation)

That last stanza made me ick. Mainly because of how accurate it is in portraying attitudes towards meat eating and the lives of other creatures in general. I don't think people should condemn cannibals for their practice (the murdering part, sure) when we behave how we do to every vaguely edible living creature on earth.

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