Red is a lovely colour is it not?

[davemartin86]

So assessments in full swing, we all sit in a hot-pot while pressure builds waiting for our week off! Hope everyone is going well with their short lit essay, mine is slowly building...I took this weekend "off" to attempt to do it but its quite difficult to find motivation at 9pm on a Saturday night, so amongst my mass procrastinations I wrote this

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comment - Red

[ellie_jayne]

WOW! You're right it is quite dark. I love it. VERY expressive. My favourite part is from "I tear my flesh" onwards. I honestly don't have words to say how much meaning you evoke through this poem.
What do you mean by 'its not ourely what you probably think'?