it's for pirates

[davemartin86]

So...fear not!

I feel that I've returned to form with a spark of "genius" late last night / early this morning. The fruits of that spark I now (gladly) present to y'all.

(wow that's a lot of pressure i've built up for myself huh?)

here's something:

Sometimes the frustrations of this bubble become too much,
wishing for sleep
dreaming for more

Comments

[annarose89]

I really like your poems, especially the last one. You write so honestly!
The last one I liked a lot because I have a long-term partner and I love thinking back as to how awkward and unsure we were when we first got together. It's funny isn't it, that you're so intimately close and yet at the same time basically strangers. There's so much unsaid and so much potential but it's all so unsure... I know the poem wasn't about that but I think your first two lines said it really well.
Also I love that first photo. It's really beautiful.

[ellie_jayne]

Dave i just re-read these poems and all i can do is sigh.
You have a way of evoking deep emotions, and create this amazing sense of reminiscence. Even the last one, despite its R-ratedness lol, is very beautiful. The poems remind me of lessons learnt

[michaelgriffith]

You take great photos... lets see more of your visual artistry next semester
MG