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[davemartin86]

So here's a short story I wrote in bed the other morning, it has no title.

He brushed with little enthusiasm, to him the chore of cleaning one's teeth seemed pointless, why the need for the bright whites when you aren't smiliing, he struggled to recall a smile.

Onto the aptly named 'wisdom' teeth - pain of existing beyond your teen years, should be

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[summi91]

You put it on! good job. Ok so, EW! But is was interesting and although I was grimacing the whole time I read it, I kept on reading it! I liked the words and the hectic out-of-control vibe I got from it. I like the description of the blood too. Although I dont think I would have been as happy as that guy to see a crimson river of my own mouth blood rushing down the drain. argh.
Good job!

Sommer