A bit of fiction. Just practice, really.

[daves_revenge]

I viewed lucidly the blue eye of God. Days seemed to have passed me by, as I lie in that battlefield. I could tell the battle was still raging beyond me by the sounds of flame and sword carried by the wind. I grasped the wound in my chest, turned my head, and spit blood out on the hallowed ground of Nadil. Lifting my head as much as the minute

Comments

[xbeatingheartsx]

im not too into fantasy but i really liked this. it's interesting. i want to know the rest. i really like the names too. i also like how you word things. you make it seem as though gastuex is really talking to you, or telling his story. also - you give great detail. i was able to paint a wondefully vivid picture in my head of this great battle your writing of. you my friend, have talent.

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