You Can't Fucking Stop Loving Someone

[david_aq]

Title: You Can't Fucking Stop Loving Someone
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Brendon's
Summary:“You… love me?” he said looking deeply into Brendon’s eyes as he smiled a bit.
Brendon averted from Ryan’s eyes and he looked down again.
“I… I don’t know what to say” Ryan looked down too.
Disclaimer: This is all fiction, I only own the plot.

Comments

[anonymous]

[sitxbackxrelax]

YOU BETTER TAKE THE MESSAGE YOU SENT ME BACK!
THIS WAS AMAZING! Seriously, I'm not just saying it. It was so cute, and it just took the essence of what they were probably feeling that very first night with everyone know everything. It was just... perfect. I can't really think of another word to use.Once you fix the errors, you are posting this or I'm doing it for you! :D (well not really because then you would hate me and that's not cool. And plus slash wouldn't like it to much.) Moving on...

“I can’t stop thinking, you can’t fucking stop loving someone” I can totally relate to that. I bet a lot of people can.

I love how all of it is so like..exact. From which bands were playing to the fact that Brent is a loser. It just really makes this more amazing if that is possible.

So I'm going to shut up now, because you probably don't want to read any more. So..
BB!<3

[david_aq]

AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

thank you, thank you, thank you!

my gosh, I thought there would be more mistakes xD Oh, I didn't know the thing of putting comas.Like here "We’re starting in a few minutes,” Spencer’s voice sounded behind the door"

In spanish you write that, and they kill you! xD

Thanks again!!

Yesss, I wanted to read more! But you wrote enough so don't worry!

awww i love you!

[harbored_secret]

Haha, well in German they basically go backwards. It's really confusing... I actually didn't realize the whole comma period thingy till I started writing my book and my editor was like..please save me the trouble and write like this from now on...
I've seen a lot more mistakes from people who have spoken English their whole life, so be proud. English isn't that easy.
Love you too!:D<3

[ms_deathbat]

aww this is really adorable :D

i always love fics that have shows in it but for your first fic this is written beautifully :) i love the nervousness and the sort of awkwardness between the boys at first and then at the end the sudden understanding and want ...it was fabulous and really cute!!!

you should def post this to satd after you correct it [cause they are pretty strict on errors as the person above said] and i think she got all of the errors that i caught so yeah nice job! :) i loved it

you should write more :P

[david_aq]

Thannnnnnnnnnnnnk you!! :D

Oh, this is going to kill mee!! :D

I want to write more, but, I'll wait to next week because I have a lot of exams xD

thanks again!!!!!

[ms_deathbat]

your welcome :D

aww poor you! *huggles ...and gives you ryden cookies* lol :) oh and i wish you lots of luck on your exams ;D

im excited for you to write more so whenever you do ill read it ^^

[david_aq]

ñam ñam ryden cookies! :D

thank you! I think I'll need a lot of LUCK because..........

I'll try to write more, thank you! ♥

[rainxdrops12]

oh hey, I really loved this ;D

I love how they were all nervous, how you captured that and you wrote it so amazingly ;D

And this: and Brent… he’s just stupid, he only cares about getting drunk. haha yeah, Brent's stupid, I love that he wasn't really there all through the story haha ;D

oh and the end when Brendon thinks he was rejected was sad ;( but the fact that Ryan changed his mind made up for it and the last line was the best ;D

(haha I'd check for errors but I'm no good at that xD I have Ash to help me with that ;D)

and I agree with Ash who's above me...you should write more ;D

<333

[david_aq]

ahahhaha, thank you!

I really don't like Brent, he didn't fit in the band at all.

I'm soooooo glad you liked it! :D

[david_aq]

Thank you! ^^!!

I'll try to write more, I have a few ideas and I will probably start writing next week, after my exams :S!

:D

Thanks again!!!!!! ^^

[lovejaredleto91]

D'awwww, so cuute. :3

[david_aq]

thank you! ^^