You Can't Fucking Stop Loving Someone

[david_aq]

Title: You Can't Fucking Stop Loving Someone
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Brendon's
Summary:“You… love me?” he said looking deeply into Brendon’s eyes as he smiled a bit.
Brendon averted from Ryan’s eyes and he looked down again.
“I… I don’t know what to say” Ryan looked down too.
Disclaimer: This is all fiction, I only own the plot.

Comments

[jessrawrrr]

i just found your fic and considering english isn't your first language, this was good!.
it was so cute, i just wanted to hug brendon haha. xDD
(:

im trying to write a fic now, i have started like 10 and then they just don't get anywhere haha.

[david_aq]

oh, thank you! ^^

everyone wanted to hug Bren, well... who don't?

:D

<3

[blackstar147]

first fic? i wuldn't have known if you hadn't said!
especially the fact that your first language isn't English...
I've seen people who DO speak English as their first language write worse... a lot worse!! XD
One thing... "Ryan’s face was priceless but confuse." did you mean "confused"?
haha i read it as confused then was like, wait! just thought i'd tell you...
i loved the story... it was amazing and you should deff get it on satd asap XD
Haha although it can be a bitch with the rules..
can't wait to see it up there... and to read your next post!!!
XD
<3

[david_aq]

thank you!

well, I had written before a lot, but I've improved a lot in english lately so I thought I could try to write a full story :P

yeah, I suposse it's "confused" thank you ^^!ç

oh, and It's already on satd ;)

thanks again :D

[blackstar147]

Haha that's ok!
Yeah i thought it was good.. your english & the story!
XD
You know what? i think i actually found it on satd... so i have no idea wtf i was on about >.<
I added you as a friend... i hope that's ok?
Plus if you ever need an extra beta... or someone to give you some lovely english slang words... you know where i am! XD
<3

[rossyrainbow]

Omigawsh! That is AMAZING! I loved it!
Especially how you used actual facts about that tour, and you put Bill and Sisky! Yeys!
*glomp*
Oh, and thanks for reading and commenting on my post in slashatthedisco. ^_^ It means a lot.
I could also beta for you in the future if you ever need it. :3
Again, I loved it! Twas so cute!

[rossyrainbow]

Oh, and the Brent hate.
Even just the hatred for Brent was amazing. :3

[david_aq]

hahahah, I can't stand Brent... xD

Thank you very much!! ^^ it means a lot for me too! :D

I love your fic btw! ♥♥