his intensely erotic lover. My mind went off the deep end with that.
I love how graphic you made her capture-she sounds she two steps and a hop and skip from going psycho from the pain. I also like the effect of the last two lines spaced out.
*applauds* First bit of Davy/Calypso in weeks from anyone.
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My mind went off the deep end with that.
I love how graphic you made her capture-she sounds she two steps and a hop and skip from going psycho from the pain. I also like the effect of the last two lines spaced out.
*applauds* First bit of Davy/Calypso in weeks from anyone.
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