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The Wish: "Brand New Key"

Sep 28, 2007 21:59

Title: Brand New Key
Author: djin7
Episode: "The Wish" (Oh look! I did an AU of an AU! Cheeky.) For the dawn_all_along challenge.
Characters: The Master, Willow, Xander, Dawn, Angel.
Rating: PG for violence/language.
Word Count: 1800 +/-
Beta: Thank you, reddwarfer. ♥
Notes: You know, I've always wondered why the supposed 'favourite' of the Master wasn't in this Alternate ( Read more... )

season: three, author: djin7

Comments 14

thistlerose September 29 2007, 15:48:19 UTC

Ooh, nicely creepy!

djin7 September 29 2007, 19:04:41 UTC

Thank you! Thanks for throwing this, it was fun.

brencon September 29 2007, 17:55:47 UTC

That was brilliant. Your Dawn was great, and it was just an creepy story. I loved it.

djin7 September 29 2007, 19:05:15 UTC

Thank you so much! Creepy is love. ♥

firefly124 September 29 2007, 18:02:11 UTC

Oh, great idea! Very creepy! And you have an excellent point about the absence of Darla.

djin7 September 29 2007, 19:06:05 UTC

Thank you! I've always wondered why she wasn't in this Brave New World of Anya's, so naturally...hee.

Cheers!

aliciamasters September 29 2007, 22:45:05 UTC

That was mind-blowing! I never realized how interesting Dawn could be as a vampire...and how scarily like Darla she was anyway!

What an interesting point about Darla being missing. Maybe someone wished her away, too?

Your writing was spectacular. You really kept the voice of the Buffyverse with a creative, interesting concept, and brought us through the whole New World. It makes me want to watch The Wish again, but I fear I'll now be disappointed at the lack of Darl -- Dawn.

djin7 October 2 2007, 04:22:56 UTC

You are pure love. Thank you!

sevendeadlyfun October 2 2007, 04:23:42 UTC

That was a wonderful concept. I'm curious, though. If Buffy never came to Sunnydale, how was Dawn there? I really enjoyed the story, but that detail kept tripping me up.

djin7 October 2 2007, 04:27:46 UTC

Thank you! What I figured was, if Buffy had never come to Sunnydale, then Dawn would have never been sent there to be her sister, however, as Darla wasn't in the AU episode to begin with, perhaps Dawn was made by the Monks because they still had to hide the key, and was sent in lieu of Darla, who is still dead. To keep her safe from Glory.

In my cracked mind, it made perfect sense. *nods*