Bad Girls: Near-Life Experience

[behrbemine]

Title: Near-Life Experience

Comments

[firefly124]

Wow. I can see how everything happening around this time would end up affecting Dawn something like this. I like how you've woven in things that will come up later for her, like the shoplifting to be "bad," and the cutting, but in a way that suits Dawn at this earlier age.

[behrbemine]

Yay, I'm so glad you were able to pick up on the foretelling of later habits. Thanks for such a lovely comment.

[magic_at_mungos]

Oh that made me cry

[behrbemine]

I hope in a good way. Thanks for reading. :)

[lilred26x]

An interesting episode to pick. The tone of the story fit the ending perfectly. I like how you fit Dawn in. Thanks for sharing!

[behrbemine]

Thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)