Braids ("Passion")

[ubiquirk]

Title: Braids
Author: ubiquirk
Canon Compliancy: Dawn-inserted AU Season 2 episode “Passion”
Characters: Buffy, Dawn, Willow, Joyce
Genre: Drama/Angst genfic
Rating: PG13
Word Count: ~2700
Disclaimer: Not mine; no money.
AN: Written for

Comments

[sahiya]

Oh, WHOA. I didn't see that coming at all. Those last few lines are perfectly creepy and the horrible shock of it comes through so clearly. Nicely done.

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! Guess that means the foreshadowing isn't over the top! I'm really glad that you liked it and found that Buffy's shock at the end worked!

[lilred26x]

I didn't see that coming either (but probably should have). The interplay between Buffy and Dawn just made the ending all that much more emotional. Very well done! Thanks for sharing.

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! It's actually good to know the foreshadowing wasn't too heavy handed. It's great to hear that the build up of the sisters' relationship gave the ending more impact!

[ubiquirk]

Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! [And I imagine gruesome things would have to occur when Glory comes to town in this 'verse. Hmmm.]

[yourlibrarian]

Here from buffyversetop5

This is wonderful. The normalcy of the interplay between the sisters is a great juxtaposition for the ending. I also enjoy seeing stories that explore the possibilities of the Dawn-verse so thanks for this!

[snogged]

OMG!!

This was so scary.

Well done!