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Fic: When You Hold A Flame (Vol 2: Track 2)

Jan 22, 2011 00:21

Series: When You Hold A Flame
Title: You Dropped A Bomb On Me
Author: dawncrow
Pairing,Character(s): Dave Karofsky/Kurt Hummel
Rating: PG-13 (lots of f-bombs but you’re grownups)
Genre: Ficmix
Word Count: 528
Spoilers: Specific through 2x06. Through 2x08, AU after that (Series)
Warnings: Homophobic language, swearing
Previous Chapters: HERE
A/N: OMG ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

separatrix January 22 2011, 06:49:41 UTC

Welcome back, hope you're feeling better.

Both of these boys are so devastated after this chapter. Looking forward to the next. Hope they don't stay broken for too terribly long.

dawncrow January 23 2011, 06:31:42 UTC

Thank you, I am. It's been a rough week but I'm almost completely better now so that's good! :)

kironomi January 22 2011, 15:57:27 UTC

wow, powerful. I love the fact that you included both of their POV's.
Dave's reaction was super! I can just image the turmoil of anger, regret and even disgust inside him. I loved the part in the car with him screaming. Kurt's reaction was also spot on.
Thanks for writing this!

dawncrow January 23 2011, 06:32:39 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't even planning on including Kurt's POV at first since we see that in the show, but ultimately I felt like I had to. Thanks so much! :)