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irisbleufic August 19 2013, 20:11:40 UTC
You set the tone of the entire piece in the first section; you land the line It isn't Lois who screams with effective, masterful precision. Thank you for giving me the chance to beta this; I haven't thought about Smallville in ages. So enjoyable <3

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day221b August 20 2013, 00:30:32 UTC
Thank you for taking the time offer feedback. Twice! And I'm so happy you liked it!

And thank you for taking the time out when you were sick to look over the fic. I haven't posted a fic for over a year, and was definitely feeling a little shaky over the whole thing.

*Hugs*

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roxymissrose August 19 2013, 20:35:33 UTC
This is so *perfect*. It's elegant and emotion packed and beautiful and heart-breaking and what a gorgeous ending!

Emergencies come and go. So does Clark, with ever increasing frequency. He ducks his head, flushing like a teenager the entire time he bids one of his hasty retreats.

Clark flustered and blushing will never not be hot like fire.

*bows*

Amazing!

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day221b August 20 2013, 00:33:04 UTC
*Bounces*

I'm so glad you approve! I'm really glad you like it. Happy Birthday, m'dear! <3

Now I wish I still had my favorite icon of Clex active. God, it was an awesome icon. I miss it.

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jlvsclrk August 24 2013, 07:39:33 UTC
Beautiful story. I especially loved the bit in the middle about the colors changing and grins stretching into smiles.

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day221b August 24 2013, 16:28:57 UTC
Thank you! That was one of my favorite scenes, too. I love the fact that you know Clark is behind this, even though you don't actually see it happen.

I'm really glad you enjoyed that part, especially. And thank you for taking the time to offer feedback.

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