Fragility

Aug 18, 2008 02:13

Title: Fragility
Pairing: Shuuhei/Kira
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Yaoi, not work safe
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach, or any of its characters.

Written for the First Anniversary Contest at shuukira.

Special thanks to mysocalledhell and jamminbison for looking this over for me. ♥

If you only knew what you do to me... )

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silverharmony August 18 2008, 09:15:13 UTC
Wooh! Hot and really really intimate. I really love this, I love how everything here unfolds in such a lovely way ♥♥ and the ending made me giggle like a smitten schoolgirl ~ XD

Thank you so much for sharing this. <33333

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day_eight August 19 2008, 23:59:26 UTC
♥! Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it. ^_^

Happy First Birthday, shuukira!!!

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saffronlover August 18 2008, 09:29:53 UTC
Kira in control! YES! YESSS!
You write sex so wonderfully too.
Well you write so wonderfully in general >.<
Thankyou xoxo

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day_eight August 20 2008, 00:02:05 UTC
Thank you~ I love it when the uke is in control; it gives me warm fuzzies. ^_^

Thanks for reading and commenting, love! ♥

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shiawase_ai August 18 2008, 09:44:23 UTC
Ahmygod, I haven't had good yaoi in so long.... But strangely enough, I don't feel the smex. I feel the love. Yeah, it's corny, but the "love" vibes are a lot stronger than the "smex" vibes. Am I making sense to you?? XD

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day_eight August 20 2008, 00:04:40 UTC
You definitely make sense! The love just sort of... poured into this one. I'm not really sure where it came from! But, I'm very glad that you felt it; it always thrills me when someone else gets a glimpse of my vision. ♥

Thank you!

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thewaywardrose August 18 2008, 14:13:48 UTC
That was great! Thank you for sharing! ♥

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day_eight August 20 2008, 00:05:22 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

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mysocalledhell August 19 2008, 03:08:03 UTC
tee hee ... absolutely adorable ... this turned out wonderfully ... I'm really glad you didn't just scrap it.

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day_eight August 20 2008, 00:06:35 UTC
Aww, thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks you for giving me your opinion - I probably would have pitched it, without your reassuring words. ♥

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mysocalledhell August 20 2008, 00:40:17 UTC
glad I could be of service *grins*

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