More Than Slightly

Sep 08, 2008 01:35

Title: More Than Slightly
Pairing: Ikkaku/Yumichika
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Bondage and stuff
Spoilers: Up through chapter 321
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach or its characters. All characters are of age.
Note: Written for the kink meme going on over at bleach_bdsm. Come play!

Not very good at obeying, are you? )

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wtf_ms_bunny September 8 2008, 07:06:38 UTC
No references to sunlight or salt... but HOT nonetheless. Beautifully done. Yumi would be proud!

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day_eight September 8 2008, 07:20:14 UTC
Hee! Thank you! I tried really hard not to mention the sun. *grin*

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shiawase_ai September 8 2008, 07:17:39 UTC
Oh my lord. It's been sometime since I've read one of your fics, Day!

Hot Yumi is hot. (icon is so inappropriate, since there's no actual buttsecks, but meh)

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day_eight September 8 2008, 07:22:12 UTC
Thank you! (lol~ I'm pretty sure that Ikkaku could have used a little buttsex. XD)

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anonymous September 8 2008, 09:51:19 UTC
Fuck ya'll's adult content lock, I was on a different account and seen everythiiiiing and I loved it. Muahahaa, now I know how to beat the lock, ohohoho.

<---JamminBison

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day_eight September 10 2008, 02:43:15 UTC
Eek! I never lock my fics in my journal, so you could always just come here to read them instead of going through an f-locked comm~ ♥

Glad you liked it!

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2metaldog September 8 2008, 11:44:30 UTC
I really enjoy the way you write Yumi. And I've got a certain weakness for vine kink *koff demon!Hakkai koff*. I loved that you had him bring Ikkaku right to the edge and then... denied! with the added bonus of draining his reiatsu *dies laughing*.

Yeah, we all know who wears the pants in this relationship *snicker*

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day_eight September 10 2008, 02:48:12 UTC
Thank you! I usually struggle while writing BDSM stuff, but this piece was a lot of fun.

I've always thought that Yumichika was the dominant one in the relationship - even if he is uke. *grin*

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2metaldog September 10 2008, 03:05:08 UTC
Pushy, aggressive bottom. That's my impression of Yumi.

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day_eight September 10 2008, 03:10:00 UTC
Agreed!

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imladra September 8 2008, 12:15:44 UTC
Poor Ikkaku......but I love Yumi in control!

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day_eight September 10 2008, 02:48:58 UTC
Dom!Yumi is, to me, one of the sexiest things in existence~ ♥

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