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Series: I'm in Love with My Younger Brother

Jun 10, 2010 11:53

Title: I'm in Love with My Younger Brother
Chapter: 02/??
Pairings: Hiroto/Shou, Tora/Saga
Genre: Romance, Fluff, Humor, Angst, AU
Rating: PG13
Summary: He succeeded in breaking loose from the rope that bound him to Shou and made it seem like the most natural thing in the world-a part of growing up, in other words. He did it slowly. Stealthily. He ( Read more... )

genre: humor, genre: angst, genre: romance, story: i'm in love with my younger broth, pairing: hiroto/shou, genre: au, rating: pg13

Comments 14

roku_kitty June 10 2010, 04:14:21 UTC

Ahh, read all three.

I really liked how it was all about Hiroto building up his independence, but then all it took was one little touch from Shou for him to admit that it's just a ruse.

chirorichan June 10 2010, 11:41:17 UTC

How is it so far? 8'D Thanks for reading! :)

sazeixrinshou June 10 2010, 09:06:24 UTC

I like how you potrait the pov from both of them <3
and Hiroto looks so cool in this <3
next please? :D

chirorichan June 10 2010, 11:42:20 UTC

Hahaha! *pressured* 8D Glad you like it so far. I'll try to update as soon as I can. :)

snowinwhite June 10 2010, 11:01:44 UTC

I agree with Hiroto. Girls smell the same.

...Ahhh, so he detached himself from his brother out of PURE LOVE. Oh my. =.=''

Other than that, 'tis a cuuuute story! And it reflects life well~

chirorichan June 10 2010, 11:48:19 UTC

Ahh, I'm so glad you're following this story. 8D &hearts I don't really know how girls smell HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I just wrote it there wtf XD Thanks so much! :3

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chirorichan June 10 2010, 11:39:55 UTC

Ahaha. All these comments just make me want to write more!!! I know I have too many other stories to update but right now I feel more attached to this story, for some reason. XD Anyway, THANK YOU! &hearts

I stopped using this LJ for journaling because I didn't feel like writing about my life on it anymore. I'm using a different journal for my personal entries now. If you want to add it too, it's thewindowpains &hearts

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chirorichan June 10 2010, 11:53:29 UTC

Hahahaha I already started rambling about school. XD That's all I usually write about anyway. -___-

sol_tama June 10 2010, 22:04:38 UTC

Oh, a change in POV! It was indeed a nice way to get to know what's going through Hiroto's head. After reading this chapter, I have the feeling Shou will help Pon change for better, and I can't wait for that. :3

chirorichan June 11 2010, 03:48:09 UTC

Thank you bb! :D &hearts