[fic] Watchmen; Crowning Glory

Mar 25, 2010 21:23

Title: Crowning Glory
Rating: G
Pairing: Light Danielle/Laurie/Wanda
Warnings: None
Summary: Written for the prompt: Someone is very fascinated with Laurie's hair, and derives a lot of enjoyment out of touching and brushing and braiding it. 63!fic, post-Karnak.

...but Wanda looks at the darkness of it sliding against her face and feels an unsettling satisfaction. )

watchmen, danielle/laurie/wanda, fic

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findmyantidrug March 26 2010, 02:19:24 UTC
This is perfect. Wanda's characterization is amazing, the attempts at self-control and skepticism and how she's sort of staying at the edges of Laurie and Danielle and their relationship.

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daylilymoon March 27 2010, 04:10:03 UTC
Hey, thank you so much! :D

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daylilymoon March 27 2010, 04:42:12 UTC
Thanks! ♥ More new stuff I'm hoping sooon.

Haha yes, he never can just accept it, but that doesn't stop us from trying to give it to him :D

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tuff_ghost March 28 2010, 08:10:07 UTC
Yet more proof that you are a ridiculously excellent writer! You have really got the hang of sketching a larger hidden story using the details of only one individual moment. I loved how much this line

ometimes people take what she means the wrong way and Laurie might cut it.

says about Wanda's habits of interaction and how they've been formed by her history, as an abused kid and as Rorschach.

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daylilymoon April 1 2010, 03:39:17 UTC
Aww tuff thank you lots ♥ Seriously how are you so encouraging?

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quietprofanity April 11 2010, 02:56:26 UTC
Oh, this is so beautiful! I love your description of Laurie's hair and all the little details. I like the idea of Rorschach becoming Wanda by loosening up into something so feminine, too. <3

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daylilymoon April 21 2010, 00:54:13 UTC
Aw, thanks so much ♥

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dessieoctavia April 26 2010, 19:27:43 UTC
This is so sweet. Sweet in a believable-for-Wanda way, that is. Well done!

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daylilymoon May 5 2010, 00:33:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear it's believable for Wanda, I really wanted it to be.

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