Ok, This made my day/night/life. I love the start and I already can't wait to read the rest and this: "Juan thought that this had to be the most broken man he’d seen, in a very long time." made me jear a little
What are you trying to do to me this evening?! *reaches for another tissue*
You know I love this, but the last line there still kills me ♥ I also have to mention how much I love your vocabulary and all your descriptions - this is quite a small section when you look at it, but you wouldn't know from how well you've described the setting and everything that's going on in the moment. You really get a sense of what's going on and how he characters are feeling, even from afar.
I'm so glad you decided to start writing again and that you posted, it's awesome :)
Ah, something from the last of the best Lost writers. I swear, I've given up reading, such is the state of Lost fanfic of late. I'm thrilled to see you've started something new and that you've lost none of your narrative voice since last we met.
Great prologue. Perfect character descriptions as well as your setting of the scene. But...poor Miles! I once drank a really old Coke and, yesh!, was I ever a sick puppy. :\
Is it that bad? I don't read an awful lot of fanfic and for the folks I do read, most of them are already on my f-list so I don't need to venture too far.
You've always been such a kind reviewer and I hope you enjoy the story!!
And LOL. Miles is made of thick stuff, I'm sure he'll survive :p
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Ok, This made my day/night/life.
I love the start and I already can't wait to read the rest and this: "Juan thought that this had to be the most broken man he’d seen, in a very long time." made me jear a little
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Glad I made your life, BB.
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You know I love this, but the last line there still kills me ♥ I also have to mention how much I love your vocabulary and all your descriptions - this is quite a small section when you look at it, but you wouldn't know from how well you've described the setting and everything that's going on in the moment. You really get a sense of what's going on and how he characters are feeling, even from afar.
I'm so glad you decided to start writing again and that you posted, it's awesome :)
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Thanks for riding with me again, BB!
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Great prologue. Perfect character descriptions as well as your setting of the scene. But...poor Miles! I once drank a really old Coke and, yesh!, was I ever a sick puppy. :\
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You've always been such a kind reviewer and I hope you enjoy the story!!
And LOL. Miles is made of thick stuff, I'm sure he'll survive :p
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