time in a bottle 7 "bat out of hell"

[pengyn]

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 7. "Bat out of Hell" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't want

Comments

[coffeecrisp7]

Ahhh this was amazing! A perfect mix of cute S/J stuff and creepy drama.

[pengyn]

Yay! I love it when I get the balance right :D

[scandaloussteph]

Lacks

[scandaloussteph]

Apart from that, I really enjoyed this chapter, I can't wait to find out who's the evil mind behind all of this.

[pengyn]

:D :D :D

[pengyn]

ROFL.

It's very hard to describe that sound effect when writing fic. It's also difficult to do that 'whooshing' sound when I want to flash backwards and forwards through time...

[lormats]

and so the mistery begins :)

It's great how you managed to keep them flirting with each other while creating a mistery about what the hell happen with the guns :)

[pengyn]

Flirting is essential forever and always amen ♥

[lormats]

lol, specially if the people flirting look like them... and have their chemistry ;)

[afishwithawish]

Awesome chapter love! ^_^

Suliet flirting and blushing FTW.

[pengyn]

Thank you!!

[propernice]

[pengyn]

Cliffhangers are my favorite thing ever. My fic chapters are plagued with it and I think it causes a lot of people to hate me... which pretty much guarentees I'll pay them by making them cry tomorrow.

I mean - um - whut?

[propernice]

DON'T WORRY, I HAVE JEARS GIFS.

[pengyn]

Excellent! You come prepared :D