time in a bottle 8 "stages of grief: anger"

Sep 05, 2010 19:54

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 8. "Stages of Grief: Anger" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't ( Read more... )

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aetenae September 7 2010, 01:50:52 UTC
I haven't been around much lately, but I took the time to read the previous chapters and this one... girl, you're KILLING ME!!
Seriously, I love what you're doing with this one. Even if it hurts. It feels like something right out of the show, those scenes we never watched but probably would had been like this.

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pengyn September 15 2010, 20:50:42 UTC
Just realized I never replied to your comment here, I'm really sorry! Thank you for reading - if it breaks your heart!

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rebeccavis September 15 2010, 15:19:39 UTC
Nice job exploring Miles and Sawyer's friendship in this chapter. It was hard to read but I mean that as a compliment - you can really feel the pain of what Sawyer is going through.

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pengyn September 15 2010, 20:51:36 UTC
It's actually difficult to write without getting weepy, I swear - so I can imagine it's hard to read too!!

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