time in a bottle 13 "Fire on the Mountain"

[pengyn]

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 13. "Fire on the Mountain" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't

Comments

[lormats]

while reading I went from an owwww, to haha (the fork thing was pretty hilarious) to an oww again and a poor juliet, way to go girl, and a James you're an ass but a cute one... to a final owwww LOL

great chapter :)

[pengyn]

I had to try and find a moment of humor in amongst the tension :D

[aquaeous_cloud]

I heart James attempt to apologize for his jackass behaviour. Glad he realized how much of a dumbass he was. Juliet is right to let him suffer a little bit, but only a little:)

Thanks for updating..was gettin impatient because I didn't get my James/Juliet Fanfic fix yesterday. I need'em to keep breathin, yes I'm that crazy about James/Jules

[pengyn]

Indeed - I think Juliet is like that. She can get mad and stay mad but there's only so much 'putting in the dog box' she'd do.

I thought I'd better update before everyone runs away! LOL :D

[mfirefly10]

*relieved sigh*

That was a pretty cute way to apologize and one I could easily see James try. But I'm also glad Juliet didn't really forgive him all-together (cause he really frelled up this time) but that they're starting down the path to forgiveness.

And the fork thing was brilliant and such a James thought, I can't even...♥

[pengyn]

I think it's a fine line to walk - Juliet doesn't play games or make people suffer longer than necessary. I also think though, that until James can express why, exactly, he did it (other than confessing he's a jerk) then she will keep her distance rather than face getting hurt again.

[mfirefly10]

That sounds like the right move to me.

[propernice]

LOVED THIS.

omg James don't get almost killed idk if my heart can take it.

[pengyn]

BB James will be safe for at least another chapter yet - because after I wrote this chapter I realized I wasn't done apologizing. LOL. Spoiler alert.

Oh my God I'm so behind on life.

[propernice]

WHO CARES ABOUT LIFE, I NEED THIS FIC.

I got in bed to read this chapter like a person would get in bed to read a book. I don't care that it's 2:40 in the afternoon, this fic is my not even guilty pleasure.

[pengyn]

♥

That's how I feel about lostproject - which I am so damn behind on now gah. I have literally struggled with my f-list the past 4-5 days, running around all day and then coming home and just crashing. My next big window of opportunity will be Wednesday - and that feels like a lifetime away. Damn anti-social working hours.

I will definitely try and get the next chapter up tomorrow 'cause I don't want to drag it out.

[afishwithawish]

I just want to hug them tight and tell them everything is gonna be okay.. :')

Another great chapter! Thanks for sharing, love! <3

[pengyn]

I want to hug them all the time!!