time in a bottle 14"sorry seems to be the hardest word"

Sep 20, 2010 17:47


Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 14. "sorry seems to be the hardest word" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person ( Read more... )

multi-chaptered, author: pengyn

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lormats September 20 2010, 17:02:23 UTC
how on earth juliet resist the urge to kiss him fiercely after the you're gonna leave speech I seriously don't know... cuz even If i'm still mad at him, I'd have give in so easily... and the dimples?.. *shakes head*

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pengyn September 20 2010, 20:29:00 UTC
I don't know how she resisted. I don't know how I resisted! I think Juliet's a lot stronger than we are, BB.

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coffeecrisp7 September 20 2010, 21:40:47 UTC
Ahh sorry I haven't commented on the last few, but they've been AMAZING. I loved the angst and the notes under the door in the last chapter, and I agree with lormats about this one... I wouldn't have been able to resist =P

Wonderful work, as always.

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pengyn September 21 2010, 11:37:29 UTC
Aw that's okay hun, I know people have lives and can't be here all the time!! I love that you're reading :-)

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meryttax September 20 2010, 21:46:09 UTC
I finally caught up with the story, yay!

James can be the world's biggest asshole but he can fix anything with those dimples *melts*

Lovely as always, girl! ♥

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pengyn September 21 2010, 11:38:21 UTC
He is king of the dimples.

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afishwithawish September 20 2010, 22:10:00 UTC
I hope you do win something out of all the crying you cause.. ;___;
Poor babes. James apologising like that would only ever happen because of Juliet... sigh

I love them

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pengyn September 21 2010, 11:39:02 UTC
I do like to make people cry, don't I? LOL.

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realist_romance September 21 2010, 00:06:14 UTC
pengyn September 21 2010, 11:45:31 UTC
I don't know, James may not be the most articulate person but I don't think he did a bad job of it here. Maybe he didn't lay it out straight, but he tried. Juliet doesn't think James trusts her entirely, so he offers her the one thing that could perhaps sway that - taking her with him into Hostile territory. I guess I'm never going to satisfy everyone with this, and that's fine, everybody is different - particularly when it comes to being apologized to.

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