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spirelloforyou August 15 2011, 22:22:19 UTC
Tinkerbell, haha, oh "Miss Bell", this is adorable.

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carolinablu85 August 16 2011, 03:19:42 UTC
First off, your author's note. OMG. I LOVE YOU TOO. But seriously, this was your baby and your brain! I can't wait for you to finish it (which I WILL make you do :P)! And like I've said in each and every email over the last few weeks: I love the tone. I love how sweet and innocent and playful it is, how... like, magical it is. It's like reading a fairytale, but with the boys that we love. I love how Luke is innocent by choice and Noah is innocent by necessity. I love the running "game" theme, as that's what Noah uses to understand things. It's all just so cute. And I love what's to come, so please be writing/finishing/posting it soon!!!

LOVE YOU. NOW WRITE MORE. PLEASE. AND THANK YOU.

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newhaven183 August 16 2011, 13:50:33 UTC
Wait...wait a cotton-pickin' fairy dust moment! That's it!
Oh well i'll just have to be content with a chuckle or two...until story hour continues.

“Although,” the boy said after a moment, starting to circle around him without ever taking his eyes off of him. “You look a lot different than I expected. I mean, not terrible. In fact, you are still as handsome as I pictured you would be, probably more so, you just look…different.”

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crownroyal_51 August 17 2011, 02:43:25 UTC
I hope this will be continued real soon! You've got me hooked (get it...hooked) and I want more. I'm looking forward to seeing how you're going to do this ome. I love what you have so far!!

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seajellybaby August 18 2011, 07:32:05 UTC
Enchanting!!!! Maddie as Tinkerbell!! THE tie as the kiss (very good)!!! Noah seeing gold and fairy dust in Lukes eyes!! This is just the sweetest story!!

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