[ shot ] Crossing Over Time

Apr 03, 2008 01:37

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heart - yunchun, drabbles - dbsk

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kurogoma April 3 2008, 04:54:56 UTC
for a moment i didn't get what the cold sensation between their fingers was, and then i was like

oh? ....oh

i thought this was going to end badly...that yoochun left and was never coming back.
but yunho waited, even though it seemed hopeless but he did. and yoochun came back when he didn't really have a reason to. the reason he gave seemed flimsy but yet so full of hope.
thanks for not breaking the yunchun. i am starting to love this pair lots.

~♥♥♥

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dbdbyeah April 6 2008, 13:45:48 UTC
was a bit unsure about that bit too... i mean, how i wrote it. but i'm glad you got what it was. *winks*

im tired of breaking the yunchun. i think so far, until this, that's all i've written. O.O so much loveeeee. <3333 thanks for commenting!

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enchanted1312 April 3 2008, 05:21:27 UTC
i opted for the almost happy ending. 0.0

there's just so much what-ifs that surround this fic, in a way, make a heart aches to think of what will happen if it had went this way or another. a great one! ^^

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dbdbyeah April 6 2008, 13:47:22 UTC
i meant to keep it that way so that it would be easy for the one who's going to get me for round 2, to build on the story. <3 i opted for the bit of a happy ending tho, in my head. takes REALLY long for the happy but..... it gets there. lol.

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onew April 3 2008, 06:03:00 UTC

this piece is very interesting. i had some difficulty trying to figure the plot at first, but realization and understanding dawned upon me towards the end.

you might want to double-check your descriptions, honey. some of the seem off. nevertheless, this is beautiful, honey. keep it up.♥ :D

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dbdbyeah April 6 2008, 13:52:57 UTC
my brain kinda works that way sometimes... yaknow, the build up from nothing to..... "oh. O.O" eheheh.

*weeps* help meh!!!

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chloe1910 April 3 2008, 14:04:39 UTC
oh god..I need to sleep....

nvm...Let's see if I got the whole thing...I think Yunho and Younhna was abut to get married when Yuho stopped the wedding? After Yoochun left? Right? Wrong?

But I don't know who left who first...was it Yunho or Yoochun??

sorry..I'm very blur now..really need to go and sleep...

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dbdbyeah April 6 2008, 13:59:52 UTC
right... hahah. *fixes wifey's brain*

as for the rest of your questions, i kinda purposely left 'em like that for the one who's gonna get me in the exchange. teehee.

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chloe1910 April 7 2008, 03:30:20 UTC
oh my ninja!hubby! I missed you like hell!

See, lack of sleep is really bad..i even have so many bloody typos in my previous comments..

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melodeon_effect April 3 2008, 15:40:58 UTC
Yunchun!
oh wow... one of the better left at the alter fics I've read. Poor Younha XDD. I'll say top 3.

Something cold dug in between two of Yoochun’s fingers within the tight grip.
It stung them both, but it didn’t take much thought for Yoochun to realize what it was. And it wasn't long before Yunho remembered it, too.

That was such a ouch moment DDDD8

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dbdbyeah April 6 2008, 14:11:32 UTC
eeeeee thank you. *blushes*

and yeah... it was like a cruel awakening. *cries for the yunchun* but the'yre fine....... hopefully. <3

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