Well, at least it's something :/

[lemone]

It's got hints of Vegeta/Akio, with a little Vegeta/Gohan and Vegeta/Goten on the side with an itty bitty bit of Vegeta/Goku. It's a short 316 words.
It's Ok, but not too great. :/ Ehh, I'm just moody today, don't mind me.

ETA: Of and the show it's crossed over with is Revolutionary Girl Utena.

Comments

[l_n]

I don't know which anime this is crossed over with, but the character sounds very cool, very enigmatic. I like how he's making littl erecomendatins to Vegeta, and mr. v kind of mulls it over. Interesting.

The Oedipal refrence cracked me up! I couldn't help but think there is somethign slightly.... incestuous about mr. v competing with his son, too. Flip-mode inference in a few words. niiiiice!

gohan's entrance just at the end was also....niiiiice....heheheh

[lemone]

Glad you liked! This is a Revolutionary Girl Utena/DBZ crossover...I sorta forgot to put that, I'll edit the post later. Serves me right for doing this at 3 am, I suppose. Anywho, Akio shows up around ep. 14 of it, and yeah, he's all that and kinky!

The Oedipal thing is funny because it's true.

[kahlannightwing]

O.O *shudders in horror* Vegeta getting tips from Akio? *shudders again*

*envisions Akio and Vegeta--erm....* :|~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Okay.... ^_^ At least Akio isn't telling him how to do it. We all know he knows how. ^_~