Comments | ddayspring: FIC: Prime Directive (SPN), 1/1

ddayspring

FIC: Prime Directive (SPN), 1/1

Feb 15, 2011 13:04

Title: Prime Directive ( Read more... )

fic, spn fic

Comments 24

borgmama1of5 February 15 2011, 21:50:24 UTC

Intense! I think you wrote John's realization in character.

ddayspring February 16 2011, 01:06:43 UTC

Thank you!

jesseofthenorth February 15 2011, 23:57:26 UTC

Well that certainly had some sharp edges! Nice work! Thanks for the very good read.

ddayspring February 16 2011, 01:07:12 UTC

You're welcome. Thanks for commenting.

xwacky February 16 2011, 00:25:58 UTC

Poor Dean! He breaks my heart both on and off the screen. I'm simultaneously mad at and sympathetic to John. Bobby is in his wise and protective glory. Even with limited appearance of Sam, I can sense the closeness between the boys. Well done for a tough subject matter.

ddayspring February 16 2011, 01:08:33 UTC

Yeah, John is one of those characters that you want to throttle and pat his hand at the same time. And Dean...sigh. Thanks for commenting.

gypsy_atavari February 16 2011, 00:53:29 UTC

Wow, powerful stuff!! Loved the premise and execution. Now I want to see a whole bunch of fic with Dean and Sam (at different ages) following this prime directive either separately or together. :-)

ddayspring February 16 2011, 01:11:27 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And you'll have to take up this "whole bunch of fic" stuff with my muse. Good luck in finding her. :-) Thanks for commenting.

redgriffin7 February 16 2011, 03:23:39 UTC

That was amazing. I think you had a great grasp of each character and their reactions. I haven't read that many stories lately that have made me sit back and say "wow", but this one definitely did!