Broken Angel - Chapter 1

[dddanno]

Sophie pushed the door open to the girls toilet and walked in and flung her bag onto the sink as she rummaged around for her mascara after her little breakdown. As she lifted the stick thing (Go me for having the most descriptive mind mankind has ever known ;D) to her eye to reapply it she heard a sniffle and slowly lowered it from her eye and

Comments

[sophieksian]

OMG! didnt expect that! You should continue it ... it sounds as if it could become quite a story

[dddanno]

Thank you :D

[nubzville]

only u danno, only u lol :P x

[dddanno]

What did I do D:
I might somehow add a Giraffe into this fic :P

[willow59]

OMG serious stuff!! :o Look forward to see where this goes, update soon :) x

[dddanno]

Will do :P

[xnataliex_1995]

Oh Danno, lol at the stick thing. It's called a brush my friend :P Lol and where is this going...? Update soon please :D xx

[dddanno]

Sorry, I don't wear make up :L it's not a thing most guys do D:

[xnataliex_1995]

lol fair enough. but their pastor does 0.o

[dddanno]

There he is crying because they are lesbians when all he wants is to be a girl *shakes head* he is a sad little man...

[rippea]

Damn when you told me to read last night i should've amazing. Dude the stick thing as you said so descriptive :P I thought we were discussing what its called for a good 10 minutes :P Hahha anyways this looks like it could turn into something really quite amazing if going by this chapter is something to go by. :D and i said last night i would leave you a superhuge comment to make up for the delay :P See here it is :D anyways update soon cos i love it :D <3

[dddanno]

LoL, I fail at make up D: Glad you like it! Thanks for the mega long comment! :D