Work

[ddshoeshowz]

Second chapter up! Yay!

God, it was more work than I intended. Also, why can't I write this at any other time than during class period?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4175589/2/Good_Luck_Has_Its_Storms

Comments

[xmchord]

The ending was magnificent and really pulled the story through. As always, your descriptions are brilliant and make the reading enjoyable, however this time around I felt that at there was a bit of confusion as to what was being described. I surely enjoyed it but there were some areas I think that could be tightened.

I'll go over this with you later. I always thought that typing was a bit informal.

[ddshoeshowz]

Same, I rather prefer talking face to face. But I thank you for the interest!