Hello, Darkness: Chapter Five

[dead_sirius]

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh my gosh. I really love this story! It's so cute and funny and refreshingly original. Peter has a crush on Evans! Squee! I take it that is sort of a prelude to his deceit in the end? It would actually make sense, you know. Especially seeing as how Voldemort didn't want to kill her -- maybe Peter wanted her once James was murdered.

And, oh! Remus/Sirius lurve! Too cute! Too cute! That little moment was priceless.

I love your characterizations of MWPP. They seem as anti-fanon as you can get -- a.k.a. canon. ;-D

All in all, wonderful story! And you must post more soon!

--Rana Eressea
http://www.greatestjournal.com/users/eressea

[cerulean_sky]

Yes. The end of this is priceless. So incredibly great. More? More?

Yay!

[aidara]

This is the best chapter yet. I love Drunk Sirius! Everything's hilarious and sweet.

[jedi_penguin]

FABULOUS chapter! I'm so glad I thought to check and see if there were any updates! I particularly loved:

Sirius leaned in the doorway. Because Leaning was Cool, Sirius had explained, the one time he'd tried to teach Remus how to be Cool. It hadn't gone well. Remus had said something about bad posture and spinal misalignment,

Remus eyed the cups and realised that it was going to be a long, possibly very annoying evening.

THIS is the Remus I want to read! Fanon sexgod Remus is fun, but this is a Remus that I could fall in love with. Much like this story! Thanks for posting.

[eleanor_rose]

Gorgeous story! The characterisation is perfect, the writing style is polished, and if that wasn't enough, it's funny too. It also manages to dodge most of the cliches of fanfiction whilst being completely in line with the book. I do hope you write some more soon.