FIC: Slipped a River of Pity

Feb 12, 2010 15:09

Title Slipped a River of Pity
Characters Dean, OC - well, sort of...
Warnings Unbetaed; spoilers through 5.14
Length Approximately 300 words
Author's Notes A coda to 5.14, this stems from my dissatisfaction with certain aspects of the way the show's mythology is unfolding. ETA: Additional notes follow the ficlet. Meta.
Summary Dean's prayer is ( Read more... )

fic, ficlet, coda, gen, meta, supernatural, dean, anne carson

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ficwriterjet February 14 2010, 20:50:27 UTC
I would love to see Dean's prayer answered in some kind of positive way. I liked your story, and when I read it (before you added the other comment) I thought it was Mother Earth. I would love to see a powerful woman that wasn't evil in the show - like Ellen was (HATE that they killed her and Jo ( ... )

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deadbeat_nymph February 15 2010, 22:11:18 UTC
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. *hugs*

As I mentioned in a reply to another comment above, I was aiming more generally for a feminine power, divine yet still connected to earth. I went with 'Mother of God' because it fit the current mythology, but Mother Earth, Mother Nature, Goddess, etc., all fit as well, so your interpretation was essentially what I was going for. Woo-hoo!

As for the God issue, all that you've said is how I feel as well. I just can't get past the idea that they've taken the mythology too far and too explicitly to be able to have a satisfying ending with the God they've created. I feel like they're going to have wank it hard to get an outcome with a God character in a positive life, and then it would be contrived, horribly affected and just plain bad writing. But, I'm crossing my fingers.

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deadbeat_nymph February 19 2010, 17:34:05 UTC
Aww, darlin'! *tight hugs*

You're very welcome, and I am so grateful to hear that my little fic and thoughts offered you some solace. And thank you for such kind words. *more hugs*

I guess that that's the thing about fanfic: Its fundamental purpose is to fix canon, to step in and change it or add to it where it fails. It's like our boys need so much salvation right now that we all have to pitch in. ;)

Bring on the healing!

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