As she fell away...

[deadclouds]

It's my turn to do this--to write a piece for a class about that cliche writing topic. I'm sick of the papers in my writing seminar. They're annoying and I can't stand them. I guess the real reason I'm writing this is because I berated this girl for her shitty piece and the girls were all "Guys suck" and claiming that stuff like that never

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[akiwisgirl]

interesting choice of characters.... rather... interesting choice of story.... thats a true one isnt it?

[deadclouds]

Well, most of it is. The vast majority actually.

I'm attempting to show my class how to write a crappy crappy love piece.

Wish me luck.

[akiwisgirl]

you'll do fine... you've always had a knack for making people see things your way... either by force.... or not. but good luck anyhow!

[deadclouds]

Ummm...I don't want to make people see things "my way." I just want to attempt to write a depressing love story that's somewhat interesting and semi breaks away from the horrid norm.

[nyxdae]

I am getting confused about George...Kristen was with george or the character?

"George was done, but he was held prisoner by the NIN videos playing. He wondered how tapes could be called a halo. Kristen pushed him from behind and knocked him flat on his face."

I am getting "he" mixed up...

It's cool though.

[deadclouds]

It's a typo. George was gone.

Thanks for showing me that. I may as well put George was upstairs... ^_^