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deadlybeauty32

if we kissed

Apr 03, 2011 23:12

Heavily influenced by the song "if we kissed" by Fiona Apple. which was an awesome sound I found by listening/downloading this fanmix

I felt like writing something fluffy, and full of sexual tension, and just overall less-angst-ness.

"I can't even make sense of this;
you speak and I don't hear a word..."
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oneshot, eleven/amy, doctor who fanfiction

Comments 19

saywheeeee April 6 2011, 00:28:07 UTC

Oh good lord. Well done. *shivers*

deadlybeauty32 April 6 2011, 00:55:59 UTC

oh dear, thank you. <3 that means a lot coming from an author who's writing I frequently stalk and swoon over. :)

tasty_kate April 6 2011, 01:09:31 UTC

um.

UMMMM.

I really, honestly have been loving your A-Z prompts but... this may be my favorite. Maybe it's the naughtiness of it all?

I just...

*huggles*

deadlybeauty32 April 6 2011, 01:13:54 UTC

I really really like this one-shot as well....and I'm usually so "ah wtf song lyrics in a fic! y u there?"

*huggles back*

who doesn't love a bit of guilty/hot amy & eleven snogging? ;)

heintz57 April 6 2011, 01:41:14 UTC

Oh yeah got to love the sexual tension between the Doctor and Amy throughout the story. I don't think a kiss is going to be enough to squelch the passion.

deadlybeauty32 April 6 2011, 02:50:01 UTC

oh dear, hello shirtless matt smith icon *coughs*

wellll I will leave the rest up to your imagination ;) a kiss defiantly would be a bit like using a sprinkler on a house fire in terms of the passion ~ ohhh that was cheesy, I apologize. hahaha

peonyinblue April 6 2011, 01:58:10 UTC

Phew! This was sooooo good - just the right amount of tension and you built it all up so perfectly, just really well written. And, the "it looks like the TARDIS threw up on the floor" had me laughing out loud - such a great image!

deadlybeauty32 April 6 2011, 02:53:19 UTC

Aww yeah ;D we needed some tension in the fic department! And some fluff...because we all know series 6 is going to kill us with scary monsters.

Teehe~ Thanks so much! <3

captjackspeanut April 6 2011, 02:12:46 UTC

AMAZING! and the lyrics fit so well for the two of them. Perfect song. You are always so good with setting the mood and scenes and making it all flow so effortlessly. I never want to see you stop writing eleven/Amy. *loves*

deadlybeauty32 April 6 2011, 02:55:55 UTC

*loves back with flowers and hugs*
THANK YOU! I think my play count on the song is a ridiculous number...I had it playing the whole time I wrote the fic. XD Thank youuuuu <33
Trust me, I don't think I could stop writing eleven/amy if I tried.