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deadoralive0013

Jigoku Gakuen 29

Jan 30, 2010 17:00

Title Jigoku Gakuen
Author: deadoralive0013
Pairing: Ryden, a bit of Joncer, a bit of Gabilliam (yes… it’s official now)
Rating: PG13
POV: 3rd
Summary: (High school AU) Ryan just wanted to finish high school and make it to college so he worked (sometimes even odd jobs) to save up. When he transferred to Vegas for his final year, he found out that sometimes, ( Read more... )

ryden fic, jigoku gakuen

Comments 58

elmo_007 January 30 2010, 11:06:10 UTC

so I am going to read...soon. but I'm taking FC :)

elmo_007 January 30 2010, 11:28:41 UTC

wow. you really are hard on your characters....I kind of love it. I'm a little worried by your A/N...saying that you aren't sure how people will react to the ending...considering you grouped that in with not being sure how people will react to this chapter, it doesn't give me too much hope for the ending.... not that I didn't enjoy this chapter, but please a little happier ending? lol.

:)

FC! deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 04:06:08 UTC

Thank you! :D Of course I'm hard on my characters! XD hehe... And yeah, I realized that the best thing to do is write the story as planned without thinking much about what people will say... it is what it is.

And didn't I tell you guys about the planned ending? Not going to repeat it though... XD

failfeather January 30 2010, 11:29:32 UTC

NOOOOOOOO NOT ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER!!!

awesome though :D
I realli hope ryan isnt dead :(
:D

allionacid January 30 2010, 17:18:46 UTC

I just snorted out loud at your icon! THAT IS SO AWESOME!

I'm still looking at it laughing my head off.

deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 04:12:31 UTC

I am really bothered by your icon... O___O

Anyway, sorry for the endless cliffies... and thank you very much for reading. :D

helloglasgow January 30 2010, 12:28:30 UTC

oh, wows.
i need, NEEEEEEED more!!!
ryro can't be dead :(!
noooo :(
you know how to leave us hanging dont you?
i love JG <3

deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 04:13:19 UTC

Hehe... thanks! :D

I'll try to update it as soon as I can.

megz082 January 30 2010, 12:57:55 UTC

Please please please please pleeeeeeeeeeeease don't let Ryan be dead! I think my heart stopped when brendons dad said he was dead, I also was all like *gasp!*.
So yeah, fics don't usually effect me this way, but I'm so emotional over Ryan being gone and Brendon all emo and depressed. And I just really want to punch brendons dad in the face even though when I hit my brother it always hurts me more then it hurts him ( I'm 19 years old and still fight with my brother, but hey, he's super annoying)... Wait, what was I saying? O well. Um yeah, excellent chapter, full of emotions and what not, I can't wait for the next.. Cuse like, my heart is slightly broken right now. Lol.

Megz x

deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 04:16:06 UTC

oops. sorry about that. Things will get better though... I think. :D

Hehe... I don't have a younger brother but my younger sister is a precious little angel in all sense of sarcasm. hehe... occasional fights are actually healthy, I think.

megz082 January 31 2010, 11:05:46 UTC

Nooo dont apologise. Its what makes this fic so fabulous. you're bringing out peoples emotions and what not.
I really like it when im reading something and i just feel like, personally involved in it i guess, i like it when it makes me, well, when it makes me feel. I think that's what im trying to say anyway. Sorry, I'm not that great with words. I used to be super good at English in school, but like they say, if you dont use it you loose it and i finished school over a year ago now 0_o

And your lucky you dont have a younger brother, o man. Hes extremely annoying. we should trade yeah? my brother for your sister? lol.

deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 13:44:09 UTC

Thanks. ^__^

I get what you mean and you delivered it quite well. Haha... true. Use it or lose it. That's also what my favorite professor says. She teaches neurodegenerative disorders. XD

Hehe... All the people I know with younger brothers say the same things... make me thankful I don't have one. msbenzedrine is not the sweetest younger sister but... yeah, annoying me is a part of her charm I guess. XD

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twistedoodles January 30 2010, 13:56:55 UTC

Noooooo. I really do hope that Ryan ain't dead. :(

UPDATE AGAIN. we gotta know what happened. pronto! I'm going nuts. :|

But nyway, glad you updated again! yay! <3

deadoralive0013 January 31 2010, 04:17:18 UTC

Yeah, I'm glad I updated too... It's been sooo long.

Thanks for waiting. I'll update this again as soon as I can.