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Jul 10, 2006 22:59

Title: Hallelujah
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untameddefiance July 11 2006, 12:06:09 UTC
Wow, really well explained and so true "They would never be perfect and they knew it. They might not even be happy all of the time. They would hurt each other. They would tear each other apart at the seams. But in the end, they would be the only thing holding each other together in the first place."

Beautiful.

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deadpoetwoffie July 11 2006, 22:05:27 UTC
Thank you! I think your icon is beautiful, too!!

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browncoat_2x2 July 11 2006, 21:25:04 UTC
heeee! Angst!

Nice job.. very sad... Poor Mal, sleeping in her shuttle, alone... so sad...

Lovely work! Keep it up! Always room for angst *G*

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deadpoetwoffie July 11 2006, 22:04:54 UTC
I don't know how I managed to write angst. I'm such a fluffy person, but this screamed to be written. I couldn't help myself. You're angstyness is apparently rubbing off. ;)

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browncoat_2x2 July 11 2006, 22:41:10 UTC
Bwahahahahahaaa!!!!

Maybe you've been drinking some of my liquid evil.. apparently goldy_dollar had some, and she wrote angst too... potent stuff that liquid evil!

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deadpoetwoffie July 12 2006, 01:45:21 UTC
that has to be it. it's the only reasonable explanation

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terimaru July 12 2006, 06:55:25 UTC
Oh, so sweet and so sad! I'm running before the angst rubs off!

Very nice job. :-)

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deadpoetwoffie July 14 2006, 05:12:20 UTC
someone spiked my drink with 2x2's liquid evil.... blame it on that.

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isha_libran July 12 2006, 09:22:26 UTC
While I like the whole fic, I especially liked the beginning-- the bit where Mal thinks that it wasn't anyone else on the crew, but him that made Inara leave.

And then, going to her shuttle and having angsty/hopeful dreams about her! *sigh*

Thanks for sharing! =)

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deadpoetwoffie July 14 2006, 05:13:59 UTC
I couldn't help but think that Mal would blame himself for her leaving. I'm glad you liked it!! :)

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icebreather August 1 2006, 03:33:54 UTC
. . ."in the end, they would be the only thing holding each other together in the first place", beautiful line. I just read this and it's gorgeous. And of course I had to go and download the song, too!

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