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Dec 31, 2006 20:10

Title: Falling For the First Time

Author: deadpoetwoffie

Rating: G/PG

Disclaimer: I own nothing but ’78 Nova with dinos on the dash…

Spoilers: none; it’s probably about 8 to 12 months post-BDM, but a bit AU…. :D

A/N: princat gave me the prompt!! yay!!! Oh, and this may be way out of character for Jayne but I’m not so much with the caring ‘cause I like ( Read more... )

Comments 15

princat January 1 2007, 01:55:24 UTC

LOVE it- (*is grinning giddily*) I love Barenaked Ladies (really fun concerts, I recommend them for all) and I love 'squishy muscle' and I really like this story- next chappy? pwease?
Oh, and you get Batman Jayne for this, see icon. :)
and...from your disclaimer, I think I want to get plastic dinos for my car! and you beat me there, I have a '94 Honda.

deadpoetwoffie January 1 2007, 01:56:40 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!! the next chap will hopefully be up tomorrow!!!

princat January 1 2007, 01:58:54 UTC

wow- your reply was quick! are you on the east coast? I'm just north of Boston.

deadpoetwoffie January 1 2007, 04:11:16 UTC

nope. I'm just west of the Mississippi in northeast Arkansas. I just have nothing else to do at the moment so I'm sort of impulsively checking the internet right now.... :)

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ceslas January 1 2007, 08:53:55 UTC

Inara understood that matters of the heart were rarely understood by anyone.

As everyone made their way back to the ship, only Jayne and River were silent.

Nicely phrased throughout. I like your choice of language and tempo, it flows quietly along without being jarring...

deadpoetwoffie January 1 2007, 18:50:56 UTC

I don't like to rush through a story. In the words of Mal: I like a "nice langorous journey"!! I'm glad you liked!!

lattelady6 January 1 2007, 17:21:22 UTC

Oh more more...great beginning. I like that you saved Book, I hope you saved Wash as well.

deadpoetwoffie January 1 2007, 18:51:56 UTC

yes, I saved Wash too. I know that Joss had his reasons, but for fic, I need everyone alive.....

more will be here soon!!

lattelady6 January 1 2007, 19:48:04 UTC

Good for you! I wish I'd been as brave. I can't wait for more. I love you Don Marquis quote.

moondreamer1 January 1 2007, 23:53:45 UTC

Now we see what will unfold....nicely done.

momin8r January 4 2007, 18:39:54 UTC

just reread this. i love it and can't wait for more! i couldn't focus enough to comment the first time (sick) so now that i'm doing better, i am rereading and commenting. (such a hard life) Happy New Year! :D