Ficathon Entry!!!

[deadpoetwoffie]

Title: Wise Men Say…

Author: deadpoetwoffie

Rating: PG

Spoilers: none

AN: the title comes from the Elvis song “Can’t Help Falling In Love With You.” I’m kind of in a lovey, gooey mood, so yeah…..  (I hope this doesn’t suck)

She was a fool. She had been brought up in a meticulous house that seemed to exemplify order and propriety and here she was,

Comments

[blugreendreams]

No, it doesen't suck, it's very sweet.

::sigh::

These two...thanks for gooing up my morning. I'm gonna go snuggle with something now.

[deadpoetwoffie]

I'm glad you liked. (we all need a little goo now and then...)

[kaynara]

"He was in no way the man that she should be traipsing around after in the dead of night on some rickety boat that stayed in the air only out of spite for the universe through which if flew."

For some reason, I just loved that line.

This was lovely--so simple and true. Thanks!

[deadpoetwoffie]

You're welcome! thanks for reading!!

[a_windsor]

simple but wonderful. :)

[deadpoetwoffie]

thank you so much!!

[browncoat_2x2]

:o)

Pretty!

I really like what you did with the last line! Nice little turn I wasn't expecting. :o)

[ceslas]

Mal..Inara...It's late...Yeah it is...Better late than never...

I really liked how much you said with so few words out loud between them, and still they know all the rest... Nice!

[deadpoetwoffie]

I'm so glad you liked it!!