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Mar 24, 2007 14:09

Title: Big Iron

Author: deadpoetwoffie

Rating: PG-13 ish

Spoilers: none

Disclaimer: I don’t own River or Jayne, or any of the Serenity crew. Marty Robbins owns the song “Big Iron.” Lyrics here

He came riding in on a big, black steed from the south side of town. He was tall. Muscular. His long brown duster was open, proudly displaying the ( Read more... )

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deadpoetwoffie March 25 2007, 02:57:24 UTC

thanks muchly!

annabella March 24 2007, 22:54:57 UTC

Priceless!
:)

deadpoetwoffie March 25 2007, 02:57:41 UTC

glad you liked!

annie866 March 25 2007, 04:21:28 UTC

Nobody touches his River! :-) That was the last mistake Texas Red would ever make. Thanks for the story! It was really fun.

romanceguru March 25 2007, 06:16:15 UTC

You just wanted us to pant like dogs! This was so deliciously cowboy. You had me at this line: He wore a cowboy hat low over his steely blue eyes. Very creative! : )

calijirl5150 March 25 2007, 07:09:03 UTC

Being pissed off always improved his aim.

LOL

ENjoyed this very much, was "fluff" w/out really being fluff. Great job.