Comments | dealliasnape: Holmes Fanfic: Let Not Thy Wrath Befall Them

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Holmes Fanfic: Let Not Thy Wrath Befall Them

Apr 25, 2010 04:53

Title: Let Not Thy Wrath Befall Them

Author: dealliasnape (HarmonyMarguerite)

Fandom: Sherlock Holmes

Pairing: Holmes/Watson

Rating: Oh, I'd say this one manages to be NC-17

Summary: Based on a prompt on sherlockkink. The anon asked for Angel!Holmes and Demon!Watson, and this is what I came up with.

Notes: Okay, This is like, the longest thing I have written in ( Read more... )

pairing: holmes/watson, kinkmeme, sherlock holmes, fanfiction, slash, writing, rating: nc-17

Comments 11

foxxcub April 27 2010, 14:04:00 UTC

This is such a fascinating premise. I was a little wary at first, but the whole concept of Watson having control over Holmes, while simultaneously being controlled by him, is enthralling. I wish this were longer, that we could see how angel!Holmes soon learned of emotion and fell in love with his demon.

dealliasnape April 27 2010, 19:21:34 UTC

I'm glad it worked for you! If I ever get the urge to write more, that would be the part I work on next!

random_nexus April 27 2010, 18:19:28 UTC

I really, really, really enjoyed this concept, and how you've portrayed it, using H & W, is just wonderful.

However, pretty please, this lovely thing needs a proofing. (For example: 'Than' is used instead of 'Then' throughout) There are a number of other simple spelling oopses that disrupt what is otherwise very, very enjoyable.

Still, such a well done fic.

EDIT: Failcake of my own to nibble! Alas

dealliasnape April 27 2010, 19:24:44 UTC

Yeeeeahhh. Not so good with spelling... Thank you for pointing it out though. We will be more careful next time. -_-

But, I am glad you enjoyed it! It means a lot coming from one of my favorite Holmes writers.

random_nexus April 28 2010, 01:56:59 UTC

I did, definitely, like it. I'm sure you could get someone to proofread for you, especially in one of the Holmes comms, if it comes to that. Your concepts, characters, and your basic prose are excellent, so I'd be surprised if no one stepped up if you were to put the word out you need a beta or proofer.

And I'm delighted you enjoy my Holmesian fic! That's lovely of you to say!

:)

summergurl90 April 28 2010, 01:50:09 UTC

I love this story, it is extremly well writen.

dealliasnape April 28 2010, 07:16:32 UTC

Thank you very much!

ewanspotter April 28 2010, 05:56:17 UTC

That is ridiculously awesome!

dealliasnape April 28 2010, 07:16:54 UTC

Thanks! I feel awsome now!

wild4rose7cool April 29 2010, 12:42:18 UTC

wow....awesome!

dealliasnape April 30 2010, 22:49:16 UTC

Thank you!