Brigits Flame- Entry 1- April
Title: Elizabeth
Author: deandratb
Rating: PG-13, for mentions of violence
Author's Note: This is the first piece based in an AU world I created, so if things are cryptic please have patience. No fandom was involved in the writing of this piece, and any similarities are a huge compliment.
( Elizabeth )
Author: deandratb
Rating: PG-13, for mentions of violence
Author's Note: This is the first piece based in an AU world I created, so if things are cryptic please have patience. No fandom was involved in the writing of this piece, and any similarities are a huge compliment.
( Elizabeth )
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Seriously, how can it be that so many so-called "bestsellers" are utter bullcrap, but you find so much gorgeous, thoughtful and imaginative fantasy writing on the net. It boggles my mind.
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It's written really well, and I love the fantasy-magicky feel of it. :)
I hope we get to find out more about Liz and everything.
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This is a great beginning. :)
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I'm your cheerleader this week.
Let me start off by saying I don't read much fantasy (although my hubby does, so I am a little familiar with it).
I would like to say that this is a nice piece.
However, I do think the characters are a little hard to follow for me, like how many main characters are there, and why.
I do like the imagery though, do keep up the good work.
Friend me if you like.
Giazz_40
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