In your compliment sandwich, hold the cheese

Jan 13, 2009 21:41

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that_ghost_girl January 14 2009, 04:07:07 UTC
Love it! As an English teacher, I get the whole sandwich thing. (hmmm...I'm hungry) But it's hard to weigh what you need to do as a critique partner. There is definitely an issue of balance here. Maybe extra lettuce, hold the tomato...

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