Comments | deanryker: Fic: Crimson Sky

deanryker

Fic: Crimson Sky

Mar 24, 2012 00:50

Title: Crimson Sky
Pairing: Blaine / Sebastian
Summary: To the victor go the spoils; revenge and allegiance are not always clear-cut.
A/N: This was done for SeBlaine Week’s Day#5 which is “AU”. This is very dark, and it's supposed to be a multi-chapter fic but I consolidated it into a one-shot. I may go back and re-write it into a series so that I ( Read more... )

fanfic, nc-17, glee, seblaine, sebastian smythe, day 5, seblaine week, kurt hummel, au, seblaine week 2012, blaine anderson

Comments 2

ansera March 27 2012, 15:03:45 UTC

I AM INTERESTED. (Although, I say this about all your fics - I sense a trend here) "My allegiance …" Blaine opened his eyes, emotions warring behind those hazel eyes. "Is to the victor." I would love to see you show how, well, Blaine needed to change to say this; how he might (maybe?) fall in love with Sebastian and vice versa without either of them anticipating it. Maybe Blaine sees how even Sebastian is trying to do right by his people?
Also, I love how in this fic, Seb's dad is portrayed as a man who, no doubt, loves his son. And your use of language, like the oath Kurt told Blaine, was beautiful. (:

deanryker March 27 2012, 15:39:44 UTC

Thank you so much!!

I'm not sure if the series would be considered romantic, per se. Because the theme is more about revenge, allegiance, and in Blaine's case, survival. But that's why I wanted to expand it into a series because I want to depict how different circumstances can change a person.

Even Kurt is not completely "nice" in this fic. I just need to get my thoughts together. I'm doing two fills on GKM so am a bit under the water at the moment. Thanks again for all the kind words!