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[deansam67]

Er...there's something wrong with me, cos I've written a sequel to my crap!fic. XD What's wrong with me?? I'm going insane!!1! My silliness - it's outta control!

Title: Please to be my luvah
Author: deansam67
Pairing:Dean/Sam
Rating: R, just to be safe
Warning: Wincest, and Bad writing on purpose
Disclaimer: Not mine, all lies.
Author's notes: Do not take

Comments

[onci_dium]

*still dyin', but no Dr Pepper this time*

With all that repetition... it was a little like reading a cracked out version of The Odessey

Athena of the grey eyes
The grey-eyed Athena...

[deansam67]

LOL I know what you mean, I think I confused myself :/

[onci_dium]

LOL No more confusing than when the writer leaves out all tells of who 'he' or 'him' is ;) With two guys? Dude... And then there is my fave 'ran a hand..'

o_0

a hand...

so, this is like a zombie thing now and there are random parts laying around?

[deansam67]

LOL Now I have images of a random hand going wild!!

[evenindeath]

why the hell do I wanna read more?
*bats eyelids and hands you a cookie*
PLEASE more?

[deansam67]

Why the hell did I wanna write more?? I'm nuts I tell you. Nuts!

Oooh cookie! lol it's actually harder to write that than proper pr0n! :P

[evenindeath]

really?
I like it, it's great for us bogans, no big words for us to understand ;)

[deansam67]

lol big words are overrated anyway :P

[agt_league]

OMFG!!111!!1!1!!1!!!

*is clutching her sides laughing and weeping quietly*

This definitely lived up to the first part. *is hurting real bad*

Parts that made me choke on my spit:

It was magical...and...and...stupendous.
He looked very much like a sweet little girl.
the shorter brother who liked to light fires and eat pie.
the older, shorter brother who liked guns and blowing shit up

And the description of their appearances/hair!!! LMFAOZ. Could you make it anymore complicated? LMAO. XD

This bit was the icing on top of the cake, the cherry on top of... well, whatever it is [alcohol has killed my ability to think, LOL]:

the scruffy one sucked his fingers into his mouth and slowly began to lick off his younger, less scruffy brother's come.

[deansam67]

LOL I thought the first one was better, but I'm glad you liked it! XD

HAHAHA! Stupendous is my new favourite word!

It was so complicated it hurted my brain!

*gives you more alcohol* R ratings rock dude!

*humps your leg* I only posted it cos you made me! :P

♥

[agt_league]

Ah well, each to their own! :P Of course I would like it. I like anything of yours. *leers suggestively*

Hee! I loves it.

Hurted my brain too. o_O

*is giddy* THANKS! R-ratings are teh SHIZ.

Weeeeeee! My persuasion skills don't suck that bad afterall, heehee.

♥

[deansam67]

Ooooh naughty *loves it*

It's stupendous!!!!1!!

Poor brains, they need to rest now. O_O

*twirls you* NC17 ratings are SHIZZIER. Is that a word?

You could persuade me to do anything. Anything!!1! XD

[munibunny]

Okay, that's it! I think I love you right now. That's the best bad-fic I've ever read!!!1!!1!!!!!

[deansam67]

LOL! The sad thing is, it's not much better than my proper fic! :D

[munibunny]

That is not true and you know it!

[deansam67]

Hee, well maybe, I usually try to keep the "!!!11!11!!!1!" to a minimum. :D

[quarterwhore]

*SNORTZ*

I can't even quote a line, because I loved it all!

[deansam67]

LOL I'll probably never be able to write normal fic again after this.