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dear_carson

The One With the Cameo Smile: Chapter One

Apr 30, 2007 15:17

Title: The One With the Cameo Smile
Author: J.D. Carson
Fandom: real-person slash / original-fiction
Rating: R / NC-17 (explicit sexual language, situations, themes, and, well... sex)
Pairings/Characters: Matthew Perry / Brandon Flowers (of The Killers) / original characters
(Though the character development doesn't rely on any background knowledge of ( Read more... )

matthew perry, celebrity, male-male, d/s, the one with the cameo smile, brandon flowers, gay, fan-fiction, submission, authoritarian, tony leung, jake gyllenhaal, erotica

Comments 11

skylightdance May 1 2007, 14:25:19 UTC

I think this is excellent but I wanted him to get fucked. Why didn't the man fuck him?

dear_carson May 1 2007, 15:15:11 UTC

Haha... I actually wanted the reader to feel that same frustration he felt at the end of that chapter/encounter. That's why the man didn't fuck him. And I see it worked. =)

yvee_beth May 1 2007, 20:56:13 UTC

yeah worked really good LOL
tssk tssk

unacquiesce May 10 2007, 20:36:37 UTC

You can play it perfectly straight all evening but he knows exactly the kind of bottom you are, the kind of pussyboy starved for hot meaty cock, too afraid to ask but not above begging for it when you’re on your knees in front of him and your face is at crotch level. This man knew it from across the room...

OMG. that's hot. obscene, too, but that contributes to the hotness.

good stuff.

dear_carson May 11 2007, 01:49:19 UTC

Uh-oh. "Obscene"? I guess I've officially acquired the title my boyfriend jokingly dubs me. ("Smut-peddler." =)

Thanks for the comment. Glad you like it and I hope you continue to...

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dear_carson May 17 2007, 01:35:36 UTC

HOLY COW!!!

Did I hear right? A Matthew AND Brandon fan?! Who also writes killers-slash?!
Please be mine my new best friend forever!!
Plus, you left a comment on the very first chapter... which makes it quite likely that you're a comment-whore just like me... Ooooooh, I'm so excited.

- so alone -
That's how I feel writing this fic sometimes... =)

But thanks for what you said... Really hope you like the rest of it. And to hear of it too. ;)

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dear_carson May 18 2007, 04:38:03 UTC

We're so special. =)

And it's totally an agreement. -wiggles pinky-
(You are so added.)

daanae June 9 2007, 20:55:12 UTC

Oh, this is lovely -- and damned frustrating! Thanks for pointing it out to me!

(Let me also say that I practically never read fic about real people - but this is good enough that I'm definitely going to keep reading.)

dear_carson June 10 2007, 01:05:27 UTC

Thank you! Especially for making an exception regarding the real-people bit. I wanted to build their characters from what I imagined they'd be, and not have like a fictional personality all ready and worked out for me. But it seems harder to get readers for an rps. Some communities on lj don't even allow it to be posted. -shrugs-

Well anyways, I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Would love to keep hearing what you think.

And maybe when you're done, I'll get that coveted rec of yours. Haha.. =)

eboniorchid July 8 2007, 21:33:37 UTC

*waves* Dréa here and I'm absolutely a new reader. I happened by the joey/chandler community and saw your link, thought I'd give it ago, and it is very satisfying.

I mean, obviously, it's ridiculously frustrating, but very hot and sexy and I love that you don't skirt the rough words or try to make it remotely PC. It's just out there and awesome.

Is there a chapter index somewhere or something or do I just need to hunt around on your LJ for the other bits? And don't worry I'm absolutely of age. Add me?