Comments | dear_one_darla: Hey look over here.

dear_one_darla

Hey look over here.

Jul 03, 2003 13:02

OK, so here is another fic. It's B/S and D/M. It is a Buffy and Highlander xover. So slash between Duncan and Methos. I'm sorry for writting B/S but sometimes it was the only way to get the slash in. The rating is PG-15. No sex. Joss and David/Panzer owns all.

( Redemption Bites )

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silvercobwebs July 3 2003, 10:06:16 UTC

Now *that* is some seriously great Spike writing. I shit ye not, if you'll excuse the phrasing. :0)

I don't know Highlander very well at all, so I can't judge that part, but still highly enjoyable.

However, I do think that the ending is perhaps a little rushed? I think it needs a little more length perhaps, as 95% is a gem, and this last bit is a little too quick - not that I'm complaining of course *g*.

Good stuff - now write some more! ;0)

dear_one_darla July 3 2003, 10:16:45 UTC

Thanks but sadly I didn't write all the Spike stuff. Most of it but not all. THis was a joint effort. I guess I should have said that in the header, huh?

snoopygirll July 3 2003, 19:29:41 UTC

Wow that was. . .wow! I don't know Methos either but most of it was pretty self-explanatory.

all she wants to do is fuck me to the wall."
"Some guys would love that."
"Some guys maybe, ... me; I can get a fuck wherever I want. What I want is her. All of her. Warts and all."

So Spike, so yummy.

Just gorgeous. :)

dear_one_darla July 4 2003, 05:57:06 UTC

Thanks. I wrote this with Lilth. God I miss her sometimes and we have a few outstanding stuff.

"Some guys maybe, ... me; I can get a fuck wherever I want. What I want is her. All of her. Warts and all."
The last line there, the warts and all. That was my way of showing Buffy as imperfect also calling her a witch (read bitch)Did that come thru?

Re: snoopygirll July 4 2003, 06:56:29 UTC

The last line there, the warts and all. That was my way of showing Buffy as imperfect also calling her a witch (read bitch)Did that come thru?

It's a kind of saying isn't it 'warts and all' implying imperfection so that certainly came through loud and clear. I missed the witch bit actually but I can see how the connection should have been made - warts - very clever. :)